Homepage / Family / VisDare 18: Gone Fishing
How Love Works Probably Legally Insane Don’t Call Me Late When Business Communication Goes Pffft! Or, How I’ve Been Insane for Two Months and Counting Don’t Eat That! or, Life as a Pet Parent In Dreams It’s the End of … Almost Like the Real Thing Plus a Lesson in Sacred Spaces What Goes Down Must Come Up Dreams Do Come True Gains and Losses Need to Invest? I’ve Got the Perfect Thing … Very Super-suspicious, Pt. 2 – One Day’s Journey Very Super-suspicious, Pt. 1 – A Dr. Seuss Epiphany Life Is Hard Sometimes #TBT: These Days, I am Only Part Throw-Back Has Anyone Told You Lately … Life’s New Groove I Don’t Share  Purging Past and Current Pains Demolishing ‘Beatriz at Dinner’ The Hump is Hell Book Review: The Dragon with a Chocolate Heart Disaster Averted or How My Blog Imploded For a Minute Negative much? Tides of Winter: Book Three (The Felix Chronicles) A Funny Thing Happened on the Way to the Amazon … Research about the US Presidential Election: Invite and Share! It’s a Birthday and More, 2017 And the Winner Is … On the Upcoming US Presidential Inauguration Contest time! A (Potentially Lengthy) Missive on a Problem with Today’s Christian Church Pros and Cons of Working from Home Cozy Comforts How You Doin’, 2017? Deblog 31: Change Deblog 30: My Way Deblog 29: Hip City Life Revisited Deblog 28: A Moment of Clarity Deblog 27: The Future Deblog 26: Grammar the Day After Deblog 25: Christmas Get-Down Deblog 24: Christmas Hippo! Deblog 23: The Worst Job in the World Deblog 22: Dark Spaces Deblog 21: Real-Life Parenting at Christmas Deblog 20: It Came In the Wind Deblog 19: Do Me a Solid Deblog 18: Another Un-Birthday Deblog 17: Differences Deblog 16: On Giving Deblog 15: A Good Time Deblog 14: Happy Feelin’s. No, Really. Deblog 13: About Relationships, or Why No One is a Plow Horse Deblog 12: About Practical Girls, or Why I Cried While Watching ‘Through the Looking Glass’ Deblog 11: About Girlie Girl Princesses, or Why They Can Never Be Queens Deblog 10: Leadership Deblog 9: What Is Love, Anyway? Deblog 8: Happy Deblog 7: Thing’s Internet Deblog 6: Heaven Deblog 5: Change Deblog 4: Nick Hood’s Story Deblog 3: Jeeves Deblog 2: Exile Island Deblog 1: December is Full of Blogidays Plovember 30: And There You Have It Plovember 29: Citizens United Plovember 28: Another Brilliant Idea Plovember 27: Revolt Plovember 26: Outrageous Plovember 25: Figment Plovember 24: All Over Again Plovember 23: Quantum Argument Plovember 22: Every Kind of People Plovember 21: I Look Fear in the Face and Say … Plovember 20: What ‘Unfriend’ Means Plovember 19: Irregular Woman Plovember 18: My Reality Plovember 17: When the Monsters Inside Your Head are Real Plovember 16: Wild Heartbreak Plovember 15: I Nearly Quit Plovember 14: Nerd Life Plovember 13: It Was A Day Unlike Any … Wait A Minute. Plovember 12: It’s A Matter of Faith Plovember 11: Simply Wild Plovember Extra, Day Two! The Alien Hour, Part Two! Plovember 10: Look at California Nano Ploblano, the Extra Edition: The Alien Hour, Part One Plovember 9: Four-Wheelin Fun Plovember 8: Flight Plovember 7: Through the Looking Glass Plovember 6: Hip City Life. Or Something. Plovember 5: We Interrupt This Story to Bring You Standing Rock Plovember 4: The Horror Continues Plovember 3: Not What I Wanted Plovember 2: Norse Asian Fusion? Plovember 1: Fiesta! Plovember Prep and Preview

Family, Flash Fiction

VisDare 18: Gone Fishing

Evelyn knew he was in there; when her dad had pulled the fish onto the boat, she’d seen the man. Dad had said Wow, that hook came out easily as the curved shiny metal had slid from the left gill without resistance. Evelyn had seen the man’s hand as he pushed the hook out. She surmised he lived in the fish and was determined to find out why. Once on shore, her dad tossed the fish onto the boardwalk and hoisted her up. She bent down, eye-level, with the beast. “Hellooo!” she called into its mouth as it gawped for air.

“Go away,” echoed back to her.

She got even closer, almost completing a full split to do so. “What are you doing in there?”

“What are you doing out there?” It could have only been the little man.

Her dad smiled and snapped the photo for their family album.

Photo courtesy of crossingilandmono.tumblr.com

Yes, I decided to veer away from my continuing saga of Annisa and Evelyn’s exploits and instead offer this 150-word tidbit to get back into the swing of things.

Stop on by Anonymous Legacy and add yours before the big one gets away. The big idea, that is.

9 Comments

  1. Sharry May 1, 2013 10:35 pm

    Cute story! I love that we both had little girls looking for something in the fish. I wonder what that little man will do when the fish is gutted.

    • AR Neal May 1, 2013 10:41 pm

      It all depends on how persuasive the little girl is; if I had continued, her dad would have next asked, “Who are you talking to?” 😀

  2. Marian K Baker (@MeleanaKaye) May 1, 2013 11:55 pm

    I wanna be the voice inside the fish; not a man but the similitude of myself. Having gone fishing many times; it was always about my dad and mom. Mom always got her dander up because dad drank. I love her very much but realize she was very bitter and it ruined our fun.

    • AR Neal May 2, 2013 12:19 am

      Marian–what a wonderfully intriguing idea, for there to be a voice inside the fish and not a physical person. It could go in so many different directions: the voice could be some representation of the girl, her dad, or any other person.
      Thank you for sharing your story. I am so sorry that such potentially good times were upset for you. It seems that, while we may all have different opinions about the behavior, drinking has been a part of fishing experiences.
      Thanks for popping in and I hope you’ll visit again!

  3. Ramblingsfromamum May 3, 2013 6:34 am

    Yours and Sharrys so similiar.. I loveed the Go away – the voice echoed back..took me back a little – very clever.

    • AR Neal May 3, 2013 3:23 pm

      Thanks, mum! I liked Sharry’s also, especially the dad’s reaction 🙂

  4. Maggie Grace May 4, 2013 2:32 am

    Very clever…had me going…where you were taking the story. Too cute!

  5. Angela Goff (@Angela_Goff) May 6, 2013 1:54 am

    LOL!! Sounds like a cranky fish-rider is lurking in the corners! Not quite a Jonah or a Pinocchio — maybe an irascible Tom Thumb? Would love to know what happens next!

    • AR Neal May 6, 2013 2:26 am

      Thank you, Angela!!

%d bloggers like this: